My name is Bob Geller and I am President of Fusion Public Relations & Social Fluency, an agency that specializes in tech PR and social media
I have been there for about twelve years and previously worked in a number of different areas of tech sales, marketing and PR.
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September 25, 2008

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Anne Clelland

Bob, thank you so much for your thorough and comprehensive answer to my question. I'm posting your tips on InsideVTKW on Tuesday--my high traffic day!

Your post is so rich with ideas that I had to print it out to study.

While I'm very excited for my readers to see your post, I'm excited for myself as well. I'm a high-tech start-up, too, and I plan to use your post as a PR action list for my own company!

Thank you, too, for your kind words and our exchange. You've given me lots of insights, which I've mentioned, is my favorite present from anyone, ever.

With gratitude,
Anne

Bob Geller

Anne, I am glad you enjoyed the post. I have appreciated getting to know more about the great work you and InsideVTKW are doing, and was pleased to have the chance to share with my readers.

Robert Giles

I'm stuck between competing recommendations. (1)Several experts tell me to shorten my message, edit the "elevator speech," concentrate on "the pitch," etc. and then add: We're flooded! then you (and others recently) send, among excellent advice, the statement:
(2)"You need to also fit this within a story." I know of no really short stories. I'm missing something important.

Bob Geller

Robert, thanks for reading and commenting. Excellent question. My answer is that fitting within a story does not mean needing to tell the whole story to every one, every time. It does mean that your story - your key messages - should fit within the larger story of the space in which you compete.

So, for example, if you are marketing data center automation software, your messages should embrace and spring from some implicit observations:

- Data centers have become way too complex
- They draw a lot of power
- They require many manual processes and lots of IT upkeep

These are generalities and I think few people would argue with them. Your specific messages should describe how you fit within the space, what new things (differentiators) you bring to the table, and why people should care and listen further.

Although you do not need to repeat the first three points (as a very rough and quick example) every time - they describe the frame upon which you are building your narrative. Hope this makes it clear.

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